Wednesday, February 16, 2011

Blog Responses

The Base of My World
     Sarah's blog, is not just a blog. It's not just a bunch of words typed up just for the heck of it. At least it doesn't feel that way. That's what I like about her blog, she's able to convince the reader, show what she feels, and have to reader feel it too. I really enjoyed reading her response on "My Papa's Waltz". Her opinions aren't just opinions, but they have something to support it. Not just something random. I think she puts a lot of work into these responses and the first person I go to for reading blogs is hers.

Jasmine's Blog
     1st of all I would like to say that I love her sonnet. It makes me wonder what she was feeling inside when she wrote it. It's really her poems, and even her poetry responses that I really like. Reading her blog, it makes me feel like her responses/poems all have a "theme", that they all somehow relate or connect in one way, which I can't really explain, but I've noticed that with a lot of people. I noticed Jasmine here writes a lot about love, maybe not a lot, but she just does, which makes me wonder.

What Am I Gonna Write
     Aaron's blog, one of the 1st blogs I go to if I feel like reading something funny, or to cheer me up (not including funny youtube videos or episodes of whatever). Some people might find his home "out there" and "ridiculous", but I love it. I actually think he's actually a really good poet. His responses, aren't all so serious, but they show meaning.

Sonnet 999

There you stand in the shining light waiting
For someone, something to happen in life
No longer could you wait for the making
Of that person destined to be your wife

There is a girl, but you're too blind to see
She is right next to me, yes my bestfriend
Scary is it not, that I am the key
For at least one night with her, you shall spend

Dare to hurt her, I will dare to hurt you
It's time for you to go, don't say a word
Say mean things to her, oh you have no clue
Always watch your back, I am sure you've heard

Give her a call, listen to what she says
Be happy, 'cause your stuck with her for days