The Dark rises
As the Light falls down
A fallen imortal
thou became
thy fere follows ye down into Earth
Canst though wit what the day shall bring
What God hath wrought to thy world
I pray thee
Save the world
I seek naught
In ye
I beseech thee
Tis the moment
tarry the Dark
bury the hatred
Fair well for now
We shall meet again
Interesting... I can see that you tried to use an old-fashioned style for this poem. Although I liked the poem, and thought that it was very creative, I don't think that you really pulled it off. It didn't sound so much like YOU. Otherwise, great job. It was really poetic and descriptive.
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